hokiepokie
04-04-04 + 5:29 pm

make a wish

Layout: 16/20

I'm not not much of a fan of orange, but it's clean, uncluttered and seems to fit your view on things.

credit to pokytemps..

Content: 26/30

You write about your day-to-day life, which seems interesting. You come across as very bubby and lively. I like happy people. I need to be one...but anyway.

Your grammar is lovely, and I couldnt' find any spelling mistakes either. You type normally, and don't even have excessive exclimation point use(which I myself am guilty of) Good job!

This almost made me fall out of my chair! Stress boobs indeed!

Only thing I would say is try to write more about feelings, thoughts, and ideas that come to you.

Contact: 5/5

Notes, guestbook, guestmap, email. Works for me.

Navigation: 10/10

All there on the left, easy to find and read.

Errors: 10/10

All links work(even the pictures!) and as I said, no misspellings or grammar errors that I caught!

Updates: 15/15

Just about every day, with sometimes a stretch where you go 2 or 3 days without a post, but otherwise awsome.

Extras: 3/5

Usually I would only give 2, but its such a pain in the arse to host pictures I felt like being nice.

Pictures and links. You can do a little more. A biography, or a 101 Things about me page, a cast page even.

Would I come back?: 4/5

I think I'd definatly peek back here when I need to read something happy and good!

Total: 89/100

Reviewed by Jamie

then & now